Atir's Story - page 1

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EDIT: NEW READERS! READ! There is a huge change in the art from this part to part 2 of the story! Please keep that in mind and know that part 1 (these first 6 pages) were made a long time ago! ;D Thank you for reading! /END EDIT

Aaaaaand we start of with a page full of colours!
Okey so, first page of the first part of Atir's Story... lol say that fives times fast xD
But like I said before, this is just for practise and it's also my first time doing a comic. I would also love to hear if you got some opinions or tips. You know, the layout and such things, if it's a nice flow and so.


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